In our third poetry lesson, we talked about Haikus and how to focus on the appearance of the ordinary world. Yet again, my students amazed me with their insights. Here is their work.
Falling cherry blossoms
I wait for them dancing through the air
With a silky wind
Shoe is like me
Like me, shoe is alone
Shoe is sad. Me too.
Pencils are like my mother
It reminds me
That I have 2 arms and five fingers
Makes me feel thankful
There is a blue sky
Cloud is dancing in the sky
What a wonderful day
My brown left hand
Sometimes soft but sometimes hard
If I break the limit
And destroy the world
Falling to the dark
I watch a hope in the sky
I try to catch it
But I can't grab it
Pencils are like people in the bus
Pencil case full of pencils, bus full of people
No place to get in.
The scarf is like arms
It is warm
It is like hugging neck
It looks like hair
Eraser is smooth
And it is soft
Sometimes hard.
Letters of a calendar
Tells the date like a good teacher
Always tells the truth
Roots of an old tree
holds the tree like a parent
To make them standing still
The old and dirty chalkboard
Chalkboard was painted a yellow color
School's memory
The calendar was teared
Because of my bad hand
The calendar was very hurt
Time is like our moneys
But cannot stop and don't come back
But should be valuable
These are actually very good! Keep writing! I'm excited to see more of your poems! ^v^
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